Effects of Technology

The science and technology developed can create the civilized disease which several permits to produce, creates the human life short, but relative says, the science and technology developed also caused humanity's life even more comfort, the picture is the before servant manpower-operated vehicles, now has the taxi, before did not have the television to look, now all day continuously looked the television saw perhaps big nearsightedness and so on, the technical progress change caused the humanity to enjoy the life quality, but you had thought these did not have the money the person, is developed, the price rise time in today science and technology, actually they because should not be joyful.
The technical progress causes humanity's life style to be separated from the ancient life, for example: The electric power utilization enable us to have the air conditioning to blow, some televisions looked, and so on. As for the spatial speech, the science and technology causes us to be allowed to live the tall buildings, may be more perfect regarding the land use. Therefore the technical frontage influence is brings the convenience which the humanity lives.The science and technology enables the humanity to have the idea regarding the time, before only can the sunrise make the sunset but the rest, but the present certainly was not this, some people daytime an insect evening a dragon, therefore the negative influence was the destruction original nature ecology, and work and rest cycle.

Focus & Meaning STUDENT02, on a scale of one to six, your response to this assignment was rated a 3 for focus. Focus relates to your ability to present a consistent, unified message and stay on topic. Your focus is limited. Typically, a response at this level has a reasonably clear purpose evident, though the presentation may stray from the controlling point. The response may lack focus and cohesion.
STUDENT02, let's work on making your focus much clearer.

Student Name
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STUDENT02 AIRFORCE

Prompt Name
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Effects of Technology
Group Name
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Composition I

Essay Submit Date
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2007-05-29 01:49:23
Score
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3 3 3 3 3 3